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Above the fold: what to put on your landing page's first screen

"Above the fold" is whatever a visitor sees before they scroll. Visitors do scroll, so it isn't the only part that matters. But it decides whether they bother to scroll: in the first few seconds they work out what this is, whether it's for them, and what to do next. If the first screen doesn't answer those three questions, the rest of the page rarely gets read.

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The 6 elements of a first screen that converts

1. A headline that states the outcome

Say what the visitor gets, in their words, in 4–12 words. "Close your books in 2 days" works; "The future of finance operations" doesn't. Test drafts with the free headline analyzer, or borrow a structure from these headline examples.

2. A subheadline that says what it is and who it's for

One or two sentences: the product category, the audience, and how it works. "Accounting software for Shopify stores that reconciles payouts automatically." The headline sells; the subheadline explains.

3. One primary call to action

A single, high-contrast button whose text names the result ("Start my free audit", "Get my first report"), not the mechanics ("Submit"). A secondary link ("See how it works") is fine; three equal buttons aren't. See 60 CTA button examples.

4. Friction reducers next to the button

Short notes that answer the objection at the moment of the click: "No credit card", "Free for 14 days", "Takes 60 seconds", "Cancel anytime". Only write the ones that are true.

5. A visual that shows the product

A screenshot, a short loop of the product in use, or an example of the output. Stock photos of people pointing at laptops tell the visitor nothing. If the product is hard to show, show the result (the report, the dashboard, the finished thing).

6. One piece of credible proof

A real customer logo row, a specific number ("2,300 stores"), or one short real quote with a name. Early-stage with no customers yet? Skip fake proof; show the product instead and add proof as soon as you have it.

What to leave out of the first screen

Above the fold on mobile

On a phone, the first screen is roughly 390×700 pixels, and once the browser bar and a cookie banner take their share, much less. Check these on a real phone, not a resized desktop window:

Common above-the-fold mistakes

MistakeFix
Headline is a slogan ("Work, reimagined")State the outcome and the audience
The button says "Learn more"Name the next step: "Start free trial", "Get my report"
Hero image is a stock photoShow the product or its output
Two or three competing buttonsOne primary CTA, one quiet secondary link
Price or "free" only mentioned at the bottomPut the friction reducer right under the button
The first screen looks fine on desktop and broken on mobileDesign the mobile first screen on purpose

10-point above-the-fold checklist

  1. A stranger can say what you sell after 5 seconds.
  2. The headline states an outcome, not a category.
  3. The subheadline names who it's for.
  4. There's exactly one primary button.
  5. The button text names the result.
  6. A true friction reducer sits next to the button.
  7. The visual shows the product or its output.
  8. There's at least one piece of real proof, or none (never fake).
  9. Nothing pops up before the visitor has read the headline.
  10. All of the above also holds on a phone.

The rest of the page matters too: see the full 30-point landing page checklist and 17 landing page mistakes.

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